在平凡的学习、工作、生活中，大家都接触过作文吧，作文是一种言语活动，具有高度的综合性和创造性。那么你有了解过作文吗？本文是细心的小编帮大家收集整理的英语四级作文：手机与上学精彩7篇，希望对大家有一些参考价值。

20xx年英语四级作文评分标准

作文评分标准

本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次：13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。各档次的评分标准见下表：

档 次 评 分 标 准 3-15分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 0-12分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。 7-9分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 4-6分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 -3分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 0分

未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或作文与主题毫不相关。

One morning I got up very early and everything around was very quiet. Trees,grasses,and sidewalks were still covered with fresh dew. The sun was just rising out of the horizon, emitting streaks of red hue through clouds. I thought that I was an early bird and could enjoy the fresh air of the early morning alone. Taking a walk in the park and breathing fresh air was the idea. Therefure,I began to walk towards the park. However, when I arrived at the park, I fimnd, to my surprise, that there were so many people there. Men and women of all ages were taking exercise in various ways. Some were doing morning exercises,while others were jogging up and down the gravel path around the lake. Young people were playing tennis. Elderly people were playing sword or practising shadow boxing. Deeply moved by what I saw, I joined them. While chatting with them I became aware of the advantages of physical exercises. They are conducive to health, stimulating blood circulation, decelerating aging and prolonging life. Therefore, it is obvious that taking early morning walks makes a man healthy and wise.

今天，我非常高兴，因为我要去拿证书！

上次，我到电脑上查分的时候，看见我的分数居然是——72！妈妈说我已经通过了，我不信，她说：“只要是过了60分就可以了。”这个理由让我有点半信半疑。

到了拿证书的日子了，爸爸带着我来到了上次拿准考证的地方拿。一到那，我的心就像小兔子，蹦来蹦去。爸爸手拿我的准考证，（领证书要带注考证才行）走到报名处，说：“我来拿证书了。”那口气，非常自豪。别人把我的照片还给了我，然后从她（他）们的办公室里拿出了我的证书。这下我总算相信妈妈说的话了，下楼的时候，爸爸对我说：“如果你这个考过了4级，以后考大学就可以不用考英语了。”回家后妈妈也是这样说的。于是，我暗暗下定了决心：“一定要考完4级！”

Tomorrow is a new day,we can have a new start.It's a very famous saying.It's also my motto.Every morning when I get up,I always speak this sentence loudly!I think that is very important for everyone.The happy mood can make us have a good condition.

omorrow is a new day,we can have some new experiences in our life.If you have something wrong with your friends or you argue with your parents,you can also throw all of the bad things tomorrow! Because you know tomorrow you will trust everyone involve you.

Tomorrow is a new day,we even can have a new life.If you swung a mace to someone yesterday,you can be very friendly to him,too. Maybe you can gain a new friendship! Isn't that imagine?You can have a very special tomorrow on your power.

Tomorrow is a new day.If you believe yourself ，you could be the stroller of life!

As to me,Facing the choices of working in a state-owned business or in a joint venture, I would like to choose to work in a state-owned business 。 There are two reasons for my choice.first,the state-owned business can provide a stable life for me ， so I can spend more time with my parents without worrying about other things. second,if I work in a state-owned business, I will work relaxly and without much pressure.That is what I want.I believe mamy people would make the same choice as me.

In short, I think I will have a happy life if I can work in a state-owned business.

选题意义：

这个题目属于社会类话题，但是与大学生的生活密切相关，应该在预料之中，充满着时代气息。从结构和语言表达上来说，难度不大。本次作文的选题是非常具有现实意义和教育意义的。首先本次选题能与时俱进，20xx年6月1日国家颁布了限塑令，能紧跟时代形势。其次，看上去是一个社会性的话题，其实仔细分析一下，与大学生的生活也是密切相关的，每个大学生都有用一次性塑料袋的`经历，无论是在学校食堂还是在超市，这样就使得大学生有亲身经历，有话可说。

文章结构：

本次题目依然采取了三段式的结构，有描写现象阐释问题说明意义。这个结构并不困难，在辅导班中都对每个段落结构，比如说描写现象、阐述问题、说明意义、发表评论等都进行了逐个讲解，并给出了具体的独家的闪光句型。同时这篇作文与08年6月份的四级作文有类似之处，上一次作文也是三段式：呈现娱乐活动的多种多样娱乐活动的正反分析自己的看法。在描述现象和阐述看法和意义的段落几乎是相同的，这再一次说明了研读真题的重要性，也正是我们点点英语四六级教研团队所一贯倡导的真题至上原则，而且要对真题超精解，提炼出规律性的东西，这对未来参加考试的考生有很强的借鉴意义。

1、 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，

2、 出现这种现象的原因是

3、 为了改变这种状况，我认为。

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点评：

此次的作文主题与以往四级考试有所不同。以往主题主要关注学生的生活、就业、社会问题等，而此次作文主题落脚点与学生的学习本身有关。议论英语学习中忽视单词拼写的问题，这样的主题更好地体现出了英语学习目的与英语考试目的的结合，使考生切身体会到英语学习当中词语拼写的重要性。

这样的作文其实对考生本身来说难度并不大，因为考生自己在英语学习的过程中必然会忽视词汇的拼写，加之日常生活中文字的电子处理手段的日益增多，自动纠错功能更是会让考生不经意间就失去了单词拼写的感觉。因此，对于这样的文章，考生可以从自己的切身体会出发，分析自己在日常的学习中有无此类现象以及产生此类现象的原因，进行简单的构思从而把整篇文章整理出来。

此次的作文还是一篇小型的议论文。按照四级作文的格式要求，第一段我们还是总起说明现在在学生中间存在着忽视英语单词拼写的现象，这种现象给学生的写作带来了很大的问题和影响从而引起了学校和老师的担忧。